Thursday, April 17, 2008

NEW SONNET





Analysis :
In my sonnet, "The Circle of Love" I wanted the readers to understand how being in a relationship has many things that are unsaid and is like a battlefield. Also how your significant other will always be there for you no matter what happens. Life is a circle, it goes around and takes a while to get used to just like love. Love hurts but also makes all of us warm and happy, just as a candle's flames hurts one when you touch it but the flame can keep you warm too.
Since the lighting of our candle, to now it has never burnt out on us. From the beginning of our relationship when you first asked me out was the first time we lit a bond together. From that moment we knew deep down inside of us we would always have something for one another and remain connected. The flame that burns with twisted lies and distress is always dwindling and is sheer of scandals. The flame signifies all that we have done the good and the bad while together. The flame from the start of our relationship never completely burnt out. That same old flame from then is still very strong and could hurt one of us really bad. It is like our hearts because we hide things from one another cause we think it's for the better but what do we know, love is powerful and we don’t want to break it. The flame could burn out or the wind could tatter around like people do questioning with me and you; whatever is inside of us could now be leaked out and our relationship would be over. But never let that flame break you apart because people will try, but the wick will still be burning.
The wick that gets stronger through all of our secrets, the lies and deceptions with the ghost of our pasts. As time passes by, you won't always tell each other everything but the wick is like God who knows everything. The lies we once said, deceiving one another, and all of our wrong doings that once took place while together the wick knows it all, it’s a symbol of trust and hope. The trust that lies between us will be strong but hope that it won't break our promise if we say something that happened in our past. The ghosts of our past always' creep upon us and will haunt until we tell the truth, and that is the knowledge the tiny little material plastered in wax holds. But from all it holds it never died because of our warm hearts but until that day the wax melts like little dust. All that we go through and conceal from each other our relationship didn’t split apart because our love for each other is too strong. Until the day when we once go our separate ways or your ghost from the past unveils all of the times of wrong doings and secrets will slowly fade away, but could always eat you in the butt.
Dripping down the side leaving waxed figures, bruises of your hot wax will always remain. Staying within me until our relationship heals, both of us will make it through all the burning pains. We have our happy and sad moments together and from those sad times you leave light marks on my heart. The bruises from you damaging my heart will be their forever as the scars you left me. But as time passes on my heart will slowly mend back together and my heart will be not damaged no more. Because through our burning times together the aches and pains there was always something that would make us work and be happy. If not we would find a way to patch up our wounds from the battlefield, with or without a first aid kit.
We have been through the ruts and fun times and our hearts will always want one another. The candle is a circular shape where circles go around and 'round which are never ending. That represents the love between you and I will have its hard times but through it all we will be happy and end up together. So when you have your own time to burn the candle with someone make sure that its what you want, and expect the hard times and falls, that's what's love is about. Now go ahead and take your turn to circle that candle of love. All that you need is your partner and you, remember always be caring.

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